Memorial Day!!!

On this Memorial Day I would like to share a #writing tip. Body language can be unique and emotional to your character, and clothing can reveal the vanities and insecurities of such person. Use this idea to round out the character.

Crystal Clary Life Adventures: Barnes & Noble book signing!!! August 21st. 1 to 3...

Crystal Clary Life Adventures: Barnes & Noble book signing!!! August 21st. 1 to 3...: BOOK SIGNING: SPHERE TALAMH SUNDAY, AUGUST 21ST, 2016 1:00 TO 3:00 BARNES & NOBLE 567 NORTH STEPHANIE HENDERSON, NEVADA 8901...

Barnes & Noble book signing!!! August 21st. 1 to 3pm.

BOOK SIGNING: SPHERE TALAMH

SUNDAY, AUGUST 21ST, 2016

1:00 TO 3:00

BARNES & NOBLE

567 NORTH STEPHANIE

HENDERSON, NEVADA 89014

702-434-1533

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Crystal Clary Life Adventures: POINT OF VIEW

Crystal Clary Life Adventures: POINT OF VIEW: You wrote:      I watched Johnny put the car in the garage. He wished I didn't forget his birthday and was thinking how disappointed h...

POINT OF VIEW

You wrote:
 
   I watched Johnny put the car in the garage. He wished I didn't forget his birthday and was thinking how disappointed he was about that.

This is not how to write this paragraph. How would the other POV character really know what Johnny was thinking.
   This is called "head hopping," and even if you are aware of this kind of mistake it can happen  in your first draft. Your character is not psychic in this scene, so you need to rewrite until you master the scene.
   You could clear up the matter by suggesting the character is guessing about the other persons thoughts.

   The way Johnny slammed the door, after he parked the car in the garage, with that look on his face, lead me to believe he was upset. He seemed as if he was disappointed. He looked helpless.  #writingtips

Crystal Clary Life Adventures: GOOD WORDS.

Crystal Clary Life Adventures: GOOD WORDS.:                                                              GOOD WORDS I love a good word. Search a dictionary for words you don'...

GOOD WORDS.

  


                                                          GOOD WORDS


I love a good word. Search a dictionary for words you don't know very well. Study these words until you can become familiar with the many ways you can use them. Lookout for words that are useful in your everyday writing. Without valuable words, you are like a ship with no sail. The root meaning of words are full of information that will assist you in understanding the origins and deep emotion in language. When you come across a word you like, make it yours.