Barnes & Noble book signing!!! August 21st. 1 to 3pm.

BOOK SIGNING: SPHERE TALAMH

SUNDAY, AUGUST 21ST, 2016

1:00 TO 3:00

BARNES & NOBLE

567 NORTH STEPHANIE

HENDERSON, NEVADA 89014

702-434-1533

Would you like to go on an adventure through space and time? Meet Richard Clary a government agent who by accident transfigures both him and his daughter to the past.

Crystal Clary Life Adventures: POINT OF VIEW

Crystal Clary Life Adventures: POINT OF VIEW: You wrote:      I watched Johnny put the car in the garage. He wished I didn't forget his birthday and was thinking how disappointed h...

POINT OF VIEW

You wrote:
 
   I watched Johnny put the car in the garage. He wished I didn't forget his birthday and was thinking how disappointed he was about that.

This is not how to write this paragraph. How would the other POV character really know what Johnny was thinking.
   This is called "head hopping," and even if you are aware of this kind of mistake it can happen  in your first draft. Your character is not psychic in this scene, so you need to rewrite until you master the scene.
   You could clear up the matter by suggesting the character is guessing about the other persons thoughts.

   The way Johnny slammed the door, after he parked the car in the garage, with that look on his face, lead me to believe he was upset. He seemed as if he was disappointed. He looked helpless.  #writingtips

Crystal Clary Life Adventures: GOOD WORDS.

Crystal Clary Life Adventures: GOOD WORDS.:                                                              GOOD WORDS I love a good word. Search a dictionary for words you don'...

GOOD WORDS.

  


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I love a good word. Search a dictionary for words you don't know very well. Study these words until you can become familiar with the many ways you can use them. Lookout for words that are useful in your everyday writing. Without valuable words, you are like a ship with no sail. The root meaning of words are full of information that will assist you in understanding the origins and deep emotion in language. When you come across a word you like, make it yours.

Remember to take a break from the normal writing routine to enjoy spring, and to take in inspiration. This can clear your mind and open you up to a new idea.

THE WOMAN WOULD be well-known around the world in the future, but there was no way she could have known that now. What woman could begin to understand, or could predict the future? Twenty-one year-old Crystal Clary reached out into the dark night, her fingers blindly reading the wall, like braille, searching for the edge near the rail, leading to the staircase. She didn't dare flip the light switch in the hall. She did not dare make a sound. Not even a whisper. Not now.
   Silently, Crystal tiptoed down the staircase, the sticky feel of the marble floor on her bare feet sent a chill up her back, where hairs she didn't even know existed, stood out like a spooked cat. Shoes dangling in her left hand along with Tom's car keys.
   Earlier that day, Moray, placed his clammy unwanted hands on her shoulder, and informed her he was interested in a relationship; with her. His eyes told a different story---frightening gaze.

In scenes where knowledge must be communicated, characters in the story should still be acting, moving, and convey emotion to keep the story flowing smoothly. If you want to carry the feeling of conflict over a long period, clothing and hair out of place, weight loss, upset stomach along with headaches and difficulty sleeping will give this impression. http://bookstore.authorhouse.com/Products/SKU-001001299/Sphere-Talamh.aspx